Actually I really do enjoy this form of writing
it's different, like a peom, maybe thats why I enjoy it so much.
Though it will become difficult to know who's saying what in the long run, becauses theres no names, lol.
wait there go one 1.
BUT I didn't I UNDERSTAND/ UNDERSTOOD perfectly.
but for the slow one "/
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and wow. I do like the description, very detailed.
its not much to say other than LONGER UPDATES.
SO BY ALL MEANs UPDATE SOON GIRL.
the story is called the watch on my group..
groups.msn.com/slyart
tell me when ya done it so i can go check it out.. its public so just post it up if ya can