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PostSubject: Oxus Gennan.   Sat Jul 12, 2008 1:38 pm

UPIES.I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE. excited
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PostSubject: Re: Oxus Gennan   Thu Jul 24, 2008 11:51 am

What a Face

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PostSubject: Oxus Gennan ; Chapter 3   Sat Aug 02, 2008 9:51 am







Oxus Gennan got the better of them.

It controlled them, ruled them, claimed them as its empire.

It ate them, recovering all that was lost.

If only.

The tires screeched, leaving the mob to deal with their torment alone.

Panic rang in the air, struck everyone’s heart. Some were foolish and chased after the van–their only way of survival.

The driver gritted his teeth, peering through his rearview mirror and pressed harder on the gas.

Those idiots!

Elist held a rag against her bloodied mouth, head against someone’s chest as they dabbed a cool, damp towel against her forehead. She was choking on her own blood and the internal bleeding was worsening.

She sighed and her eyes fluttered. Her hands clenched tightly to the closest thing she could grab for support.

The tray holding the syringe needles.

Her eyes closed and she heard the movement.

Someone was helping her. The soft spurt of liquid sang in her ears a sweet, slow melody.

She could picture the substance leaking down the tip and her fingers itched to touch the syringe.

She felt the needle pierce her skin.

Her back arched, her teeth barred, she was in pain.

Elist couldn’t believe just how fast the tables had turned.

Now, she was the one in need, the one who depended upon those cheap, pathetic syringes to save her life.

A few coughs later and she sprang up.

The red rag sailed out the opened window and the cries and shouts of the mob were a thing of the past. The van had gained some distance.

They were safe.

"How many we got left?" It was the driver that spoke. He looked over his shoulder for a few seconds and quickly brought his eyes back to the road. He swerved around the rusted car that was a victim to arson.

"Only two more."

"Save those for her later,"
a pause, "just in case."The woman frowned, scrunched her face, and brought her gaze back towards Elist.

The lines on her forehead wrinkled. She was worried for the poor girl.

She shook her head thinking about their situation.

She knew it was only a matter of time.

She dabbed the woman’s forehead.

That’s exactly what it was.

Time.

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PostSubject: Oxus Gennan.   Sat Aug 02, 2008 4:16 pm

Elist is now infected hmm I wonder what's gonna happen to her. At least they all got away from the crowd of people[I feel sorry for them.]Oxus Gennan really is taking over the world. This is crazzi

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PostSubject: Re: Oxus Gennan   Sat Aug 02, 2008 6:43 pm

THANKS KISHA !! lol

You're like the only one really reading this story and making sure to check back on it whenever I review. It's you and Jazzman, and I just want to say THANK YOU !!

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PostSubject: Oxus Gennan   Sun Aug 03, 2008 7:50 pm

YOUR WELCOME.
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PostSubject: OMG   Wed Aug 06, 2008 11:32 pm

OMG...THIS IS CRAZY WHAT IF THIS REALLY HAPPEN IN REAL LIFE..??
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PostSubject: Oxus Gennan ; Chapter 4   Sun Aug 17, 2008 1:59 pm








Oxus Gennan.

A corrupter, a tormentor, a lover, a friend.

It was so many things to them.

The van slowly eased in front of the barbed wire electric fence. The posts that were dug in the ground were set every fifteen feet apart and the fence itself was thirty feet high. The electric current held a voltage that soared to 700V; enough to kill animals on the spot.

Enough shock to deter them–all of those cravings, all of those people.

It was enough to give them internal burns, damage their tissue, and in some cases, stop the heart.

Fatal?

Yes.

Was that always the case?

Not all of the time.

16V was all that was needed to cause serious damage–fatal damage. 16V was enough to kill a man. It could surge through the body, passing through internal organs.

If it hit that one precious organ, a man could die.

If the heart was struck, he would be out of luck.

The van drove alongside the speaker box and small control panel. The driver’s finger held and pressed the button to bring down his window. His arm extended out the van, over the control pad.

His fingers got to work, typing in the six number key code to open a section of the barbed fence.

When he pressed the return key, he heard the familiar whizzing sound of electric voltage begin to descend only slightly.

700V.

650 V.

600V.

550V.

500V.

It was still enough shock to cause damage.

The two posts positioned in front of the van shifted. The electric wires connecting both posts together began to retract inside the posts. The middle section in the wires split apart, creating a space wide enough for their van to pass through.

The driver checked his mirrors.

No one was behind them.

Good.

His boot pressed softly on the gas pedal and the van stirred back to life. The tires rolled over tree debris, cracking twigs in two. Elist looked out the window. She gazed back at the electric fence and her heart ached thinking of all of those on the other side of it.

If only.

The transition was a normal sight.

Past the chaos–the upturned trees, dirtied streets filled with debris, cracked pavement, abandoned homes, cracked windows–and into the calm.

It was like a border. A forbidden border bridging one side to the next. Some didn’t like the bridge; they felt vulnerable, open. There were too many gaps, open opportunities.

Like a gate wide open with angels playing on harps, singing and beckoning one to come forth and end their nightmares.

End their pain.

The red cross van drove down the narrow street that ran several yards long. There was nothing to either side of them, except dirt; dirt where the grass should be.

Everything was dead.

The air was quiet, silenced by thoughts.

Elist’s head bobbed to the movement of the van.

She looked towards her friend, Serene, the woman who helped her.

The both of them smiled–faintly, weakly.

They knew what the other was thinking.

Why?

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PostSubject: Re: Oxus Gennan   Sun Aug 17, 2008 5:53 pm

GOSH DARNIT!
I forgot she got the sickness! affraid

brit brit. . i just wanna be in your mind for a day, like what was you thinking when you wrote this, lol. . . [ not a bad thing ] because like i'm really into this, it reminds me of one of those sci-fi moviesss, forreaL.

But back to Elist . . IS SHE GONNA BE OKAY ???

And that gate, I KNOW FOR A FACT, it's gonna be one dare devil to hop over that. . we'll try and die, i'm just waiting for that to happen, lol...

and at the end, last post . . . what the helll are they smiling for. . ??
what about those other sick people, they just gonna leave em like that ?? =/ pale

I feel bad for em, I would be chasing that van, on top of the van, they slacking hard !!

but UPDATE, and not next week . . TODAY !!!! lol
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