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PostSubject: DisAintYaAverageChick   Sun Aug 03, 2008 5:26 pm

From: DisAintYaAverageChickSent: 6/21/2008 12:02 AM


I WANNA KNOW WHY HE WANTS ZARIAH TO KILL CHRISTIAN!! AND SHE SEEMS LIKE ONE OF THOSE CRAZY PEOPLE THAT NOBODY'S FUCKS WITH!! MAN THIS STORY IS VERY ORIGINAL!! I LIKE THE WHOLE SETTING AND THEME OF THE STORY!! PLUS, I LOVE READIN ABOUT STORIES THAT HAVE SOME KIND OF MURDER OR WHATEVER IN IT. I WANNA READ MORE!! UPDATE SOON!!

PRECIOUS /P NUT/

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PostSubject: Re: midnight.MURDER at Belvonte   Sun Aug 03, 2008 5:27 pm

From: Omarionsnumber1gurlSent: 6/21/2008 11:25 AM


Kisha's Review.
This story is really intresting and descriptive.
I want to know why that man wants Christian dead
And I want to know what's up w/ Zariah, why does she kill people? Does she kill people to make money?

Update Soon Please.


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PostSubject: Adrian   Sun Aug 03, 2008 5:28 pm

From: authentic_frshnessSent: 6/24/2008 4:23 PM


ADRIAN'S REVIEW :
Once again , this is very good brit
i liked the descriptive words you
used. I could actually picture stuff
in my head. I wonder why he wants
Christian dead. guess ill have to wait
and see. Update soon girl !


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PostSubject: Omarionsnumber1gurl   Sun Aug 03, 2008 5:30 pm

From: Omarionsnumber1gurlSent: 6/29/2008 11:56 AM

Midnight. murder at Belvonte
Very intresting...this mystery guy wants Zariah to kill Christian Belvadore(Hmm I wonder why).
So Zariah's gonna be his maid who is plotting to kill him. Very Mysterious!

Please update soon.


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PostSubject: AllBoutThatMoney11   Sun Aug 03, 2008 5:30 pm

From: AllBoutThatMoney11Sent: 6/29/2008 2:03 PM


Ok. I think i get it now. She is not a contract killer. But a female \"Blade\". Am i right? I hope i am . But anyway. This story is too raw. And how do you do that? How do you describe such details in your story? Now that's what i need to learn to do. But anyway i can't wait for you to post the next update. Because i want to see how she kills this guy? And also does her sidekick or whatever. Have a secert crush on her? Because it seems like he does. But anyway. update soon. Can't wait to read more.

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PostSubject: good story   Sun Aug 03, 2008 6:37 pm

Where is she scaring off pigs like that lol.
She can't be in the city. I know that was random
but I do look at minor detail. So she is the best
of the best huh. She reminds me of that electra chick
lol. I like the way you wrote this, its very neat and
not messy. Anyways this couldn't be america cause you got
zentos and I dont know what that is (Yea how ignorant am I?)
Im guessing those are coins and that sounds like England
or something (If im wrong it just further demonstrates
my ignorance and your creativity)
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