http://creative-xpressions.forumotion.com/critique-parlor-f13/-t1.htm Get a dose of the truth. Have your story critiqued by me. Mon, 04 Aug 2008 00:36:31 GMT 10 http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/460/katyperry2.png http://creative-xpressions.forumotion.com/critique-parlor-f13/-t1.htm http://creative-xpressions.forumotion.com/critique-parlor-f13/please-read-my-story-t312.htm sabia Form: Your Name :sabia Your age : 16 Title of your story : let her be bonnie Website where story is located [ direct link me to your story ] : http://groups.msn.com/MzFizzlesChillspot/fanfiction.msnw?action=get_message&mview=0&ID_Message=149639&LastModified=4675684151331921793 Your screen name on the site :bstopcallingme Chapters : 3 chapters 6 updates i think Posts [ how many POSTS or REPLIES have people made to your story ] : 60 Your EMAIL address [ so I can ... Critique Parlor Mon, 04 Aug 2008 00:36:31 GMT http://creative-xpressions.forumotion.com/critique-parlor-f13/please-read-my-story-t312.htm#804 http://creative-xpressions.forumotion.com/critique-parlor-f13/please-read-my-story-t312.htm http://creative-xpressions.forumotion.com/critique-parlor-f13/oh-brit-brit--t311.htm EXTRAordinary1234 Your Name - Sharday Your age - 16 Title of your story - change for the better. Website where story is located [ direct link me to your story ] - http://groups.msn.com/qOt-swaqqqetWAGGA/general.msnw?action=get_message&mview=0&ID_Message=139&LastModified=4675684151783052432 Your screen name on the site - -ьeму_уоdelbuddy Chapters - 8 Posts [ how many POSTS or REPLIES have people made to your story ] - actually it's a private story. i just need ... Critique Parlor Mon, 04 Aug 2008 00:01:30 GMT http://creative-xpressions.forumotion.com/critique-parlor-f13/oh-brit-brit--t311.htm#803 http://creative-xpressions.forumotion.com/critique-parlor-f13/oh-brit-brit--t311.htm http://creative-xpressions.forumotion.com/critique-parlor-f13/critique-please-t251.htm Anonymous Hay Brit. I love your writting styles and all of your stories are good and I think my writing needs improvements but I need a professional to critique it for me. Please. Title: Diamonds| the Reign of Terror Genre: Apocolypse, Mystery Location| London February 2, 1642 Once I layed my eye's on the Precious gold diamond, I knew I had to have it for it was equisit and devine. It had caught my attention unlike any other. When the bright sun light hit against it, it reflected ... Critique Parlor Sun, 20 Jul 2008 16:53:53 GMT http://creative-xpressions.forumotion.com/critique-parlor-f13/critique-please-t251.htm#698 http://creative-xpressions.forumotion.com/critique-parlor-f13/critique-please-t251.htm http://creative-xpressions.forumotion.com/critique-parlor-f13/me-story-t152.htm Anonymous Your age : 18
Title of your story : Moonlight Blues
Website where story is located [ direct link me to your story ] :
Your screen name on the site : Desires
Chapters : Prologue
Posts [ how many POSTS or REPLIES have people made to your story ] : 7
Your EMAIL address [ so I can EMAIL you the critique if problems may occur ] : Just_shandenise@hotmail.com]]> Critique Parlor Mon, 26 May 2008 16:22:35 GMT http://creative-xpressions.forumotion.com/critique-parlor-f13/me-story-t152.htm#417 http://creative-xpressions.forumotion.com/critique-parlor-f13/me-story-t152.htm http://creative-xpressions.forumotion.com/critique-parlor-f13/critique-my-story-please-t153.htm x__unspokenWORDZ Form: Your Name : amelia Your age : 18 Title of your story : concrete jungle Website where story is located [ direct link me to your story ] : concrete.JUNGLE Your screen name on the site : a u t h e n t i k Chapters : only 1 Posts [ how many POSTS or REPLIES have people made to your story ] : 31 Your EMAIL address [ so I can EMAIL you the critique if problems may occur ] : ameliajones084@gmail.com Critique Parlor Mon, 26 May 2008 18:05:57 GMT http://creative-xpressions.forumotion.com/critique-parlor-f13/critique-my-story-please-t153.htm#419 http://creative-xpressions.forumotion.com/critique-parlor-f13/critique-my-story-please-t153.htm http://creative-xpressions.forumotion.com/critique-parlor-f13/story-review-t150.htm Anonymous Your Name : Sheena Your age : 19 Title of your story : Last time Website where story is located [ direct link me to your story ] : Your screen name on the site : ShaSinkaShay Chapters : IDK. Three I believe. Maybe four but I doubt it. Posts [ how many POSTS or REPLIES have people made to your story ] : 105 Your EMAIL address [ so I can EMAIL you the critique if problems may occur ] : Mizz_Sheena08@yahoo.com I Don't really know if I need my story critiqued but maybe a little ... Critique Parlor Mon, 26 May 2008 06:40:34 GMT http://creative-xpressions.forumotion.com/critique-parlor-f13/story-review-t150.htm#410 http://creative-xpressions.forumotion.com/critique-parlor-f13/story-review-t150.htm http://creative-xpressions.forumotion.com/critique-parlor-f13/i-need-your-guidence-lmao-t151.htm Anonymous Your age : 17
Title of your story : Sakura Kisses
Website where story is located [ direct link me to your story ] :
Your screen name on the site : Artistic_Le16
Chapters : just 2
Posts [ how many POSTS or REPLIES have people made to your story ] : 4
Your EMAIL address [ so I can EMAIL you the critique if problems may occur ] :Artistic_writer16@hotmail.com]]> Critique Parlor Mon, 26 May 2008 15:46:49 GMT http://creative-xpressions.forumotion.com/critique-parlor-f13/i-need-your-guidence-lmao-t151.htm#413 http://creative-xpressions.forumotion.com/critique-parlor-f13/i-need-your-guidence-lmao-t151.htm http://creative-xpressions.forumotion.com/critique-parlor-f13/hmmm-i-decided-i-was-going-to-write-a-starter-for-someone-u-t147.htm matt I am going to describe to you the most magestic place in the world. It is a place where love never dies and happiness is a way of life. When the sun rises over the turquois water surrounding the island it brings a sense of tranquility to the inhabitants. Even on the rainiest days the beaches retain their unthinkable beauty. The winds move the palm trees in a type of rhythmic dance. The air continually carries the aroma of fresh flowers. Even while strolling through the open air market you can ... Critique Parlor Mon, 17 Mar 2008 23:49:21 GMT http://creative-xpressions.forumotion.com/critique-parlor-f13/hmmm-i-decided-i-was-going-to-write-a-starter-for-someone-u-t147.htm#394 http://creative-xpressions.forumotion.com/critique-parlor-f13/hmmm-i-decided-i-was-going-to-write-a-starter-for-someone-u-t147.htm http://creative-xpressions.forumotion.com/critique-parlor-f13/critique-please-brit-lol-t117.htm <3 epitome.BEAUTY Form: Your Name : Clarissa Your age : 16 Title of your story : Clandestine | The Play Website where story is located [ direct link me to your story ] : Clandestine | The Play Your screen name on the site : ♥ερıтoмε→вεαυту Chapters : 1 Posts [ how many POSTS or REPLIES have people made to your story ] : 17 Your EMAIL address [ so I can EMAIL you the critique if problems may occur ] : HisSouljaGirl901@yahoo.com Critique Parlor Wed, 06 Feb 2008 21:16:48 GMT http://creative-xpressions.forumotion.com/critique-parlor-f13/critique-please-brit-lol-t117.htm#248 http://creative-xpressions.forumotion.com/critique-parlor-f13/critique-please-brit-lol-t117.htm http://creative-xpressions.forumotion.com/critique-parlor-f13/hmmmmmmm-laaalalalalaaaaa-t110.htm munee.bby Form: Your Name : Candice Watson Your age : 16 Title of your story : ѕυвмεяgεd Website where story is located [ direct link me to your story ] : B2KFanfiction [ http://groups.msn.com/b2kfanfiction/poststories.msnw?action=get_message&mview=0&ID_Message=502342&LastModified=4675659252262811175 ] Your screen name on the site : мυnεε×ьву™ Chapters : not even one. i have the prolouge Posts ... Critique Parlor Mon, 04 Feb 2008 21:29:00 GMT http://creative-xpressions.forumotion.com/critique-parlor-f13/hmmmmmmm-laaalalalalaaaaa-t110.htm#227 http://creative-xpressions.forumotion.com/critique-parlor-f13/hmmmmmmm-laaalalalalaaaaa-t110.htm http://creative-xpressions.forumotion.com/critique-parlor-f13/critique-my-story-t103.htm SoFlySoSexy Your Name : Kikora Your age : 16 Title of your story : I Wanna Be Website where story is located [ direct link me to your story ] : I don't have a link yet because I have yet to post the stoy yet. Your screen name on the site : SoFlySoSexy Chapters : Only a paragrah, just for you see if you like it. Posts [ how many POSTS or REPLIES have people made to your story ] : none yet Your EMAIL address [ so I can EMAIL you the critique if problems may occur ] : LadyWifey001@yahoo.com Chapter ... Critique Parlor Mon, 04 Feb 2008 00:11:35 GMT http://creative-xpressions.forumotion.com/critique-parlor-f13/critique-my-story-t103.htm#196 http://creative-xpressions.forumotion.com/critique-parlor-f13/critique-my-story-t103.htm