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PostSubject: hmmm i decided i was going to write a starter for someone u   Mon Mar 17, 2008 5:49 pm

I am going to describe to you the most magestic place in the world. It is a place where love never dies and happiness is a way of life. When the sun rises over the turquois water surrounding the island it brings a sense of tranquility to the inhabitants. Even on the rainiest days the beaches retain their unthinkable beauty. The winds move the palm trees in a type of rhythmic dance. The air continually carries the aroma of fresh flowers. Even while strolling through the open air market you can not take in a breath of foul air. Infact the delightful scent of fresh bread and ripe fruit fills the air. The fragrance is so heavy you can taste it sweetly on your tongue. I've been to this place and it is like a little slice of heaven. It is known as loves paradise.


People use it if u like but put me int he story some where that is if u like it BRIT CRITIQUE IT! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: hmmm i decided i was going to write a starter for someone u   Mon Mar 17, 2008 9:21 pm

LMFAO ... matt, sit yo ass down.

You didn't even fill out the FORM !

lol!

you're a goof ball ...

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PostSubject: Re: hmmm i decided i was going to write a starter for someone u   Tue Mar 18, 2008 2:55 pm

i figure since u knew me pretty well i didnt need to plus i was to lazy shiittt was it good or not ur not supposed to critize me ur supposed to critize the writing >.>
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